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    dots Submission Name: Mind Gardendots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 580
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Just a quick poem at work to break up the monotony.


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    dotsMind Gardendots

    Time to water seeds of growth
    in the garden of my mind

    Pull out weeds of negativity
    replace the bad with kind

    Remember what I think
    is what I sow

    Help my soul and mind
    to positively grow

    Contemplate "As Man Thinketh,
    So He Is"

    He is I and
    mine is HIS

    Submitted on 2005-07-06 16:36:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was great really makes me think when reading i try to place myself the chacter and the writer very nice and well described
    thanx for the comment on Crazy iam glad you enjoyed part 2 will come soon maybe today or tommorrow
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2005-07-27 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      A simple and straight ahead message you've penned Tiff, I like that you help us remember our way with your thoughts.
    My garden is growing fairly well now thanks to you.
    I return to Eden's eye to quench my thirst
    everlasting is the key.
    peace and love,
    | Posted on 2005-07-07 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      Very inspiring piece. Love your phrases and how you can capture a feeling in so little words. For me it takes 245 words. lol

    Cool Write
    | Posted on 2005-07-07 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      I like.
    It's a nice poem. the way you have it written helps slow people like me (:P) understand it.
    It has a nice truth to it that so many need to follow.
    | Posted on 2005-07-06 00:00:00 | by Lies | [ Reply to This ]

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