Description: when i wrote this i was kinda lonely. but in a way it felt good. i just didn't wanna be bothered.
i hope someone reads this. all feedback is positive feedback.
nuthin 2 say -------------------------------------------
i hate those who got nuthin 2 say
but they constantly conversational
but everyday
they think it's their responsibilty
is 2 tell u shit that don't relate 2 u
so i tell em yo i really don't want u 2 speak 2 me
how do u treat people the way they treat u
when no one shows the decency
2 accept when u need solitude
and when u need company
those who surround me get no gratitude
4 being on all sides above inside and under me
wonderin why humans have 2 be social
reproachful on this subject
due 2 my solitary proposals
feelins expressed through all these vocals
man my arts are hopeful
except when i'm exposed 2
noisy socialistic bitches worried about riches
but always in my business decisions
with vicious contradictions
conditions that i had 2 go through
just 2 be acknowledged by u
going through these rituals
2 be finally seen as an individual
sittin through times never dealin with the political
This was pretty good...very intresting title...I liked how your description was...I think I know the feeling. You really have a way of explaining things perfectly...I was really feeling the flow here...this was pretty tight:) I don't really know what to say...it was almost a conversation but I liked it...I really know the feelings you described here...I don't understand how some people never ever want to be alone and then never understand when you do. anyway nice write. peace
Nuttin to say was a very interesting title for this.It seems to me that you do and always have had something to say.
i hate those who got nuthin 2 say but they constantly conversational
um i found that line very interesting. i talk even when i have nothing to say and you still talk to me.Of course maybe thats becuase i dont realy try and tell you things that dont relate to you.
man my arts are hopeful except when i'm exposed 2 noisy socialistic [censored]es worried about riches
When you wrote these lines were you talking about rappers who are only in the game for the millions that they can earn.Thats another thing i dont understand how all these untalented ego driven rappers can make so much money. See its stupid people.
with vicious contradictions conditions that i had 2 go through just 2 be acknowledged by u going through these rituals 2 be finally seen as an individual
this part also hit a rough spot in me. Cause when i was in florida in like the 5th grade not a single soul liked me. I had to do a complete turn around when it came to my personality to get just a few superficial friends. When i finally got tirred of being someone who i wasnt i lost everbody that started talking to me. But then mabe god saw what was happening and saved me becasue a few weeeks after that this girl moved to our school and was just like me and we became best friends. so maybe everything works out for the best uh. well anyway this was a realy good write and i lked it. i could realy relate to it.keep your head up troy.
i like this much! im with amber it was confuzing for me at some parts! but i really liked it and i do agree with you on alot of the things u said! my fav part was: "man my arts are hopeful except when i'm exposed 2 noisy socialistic [censored]es worried about riches" -good write and keep it up! luv ya! **KeLLe**
hey! i thought this was good, tho i kinda got it, it was still kunfuzing to me!lol!i like ur rhymes... they kinda make me relax but really concentrate at the same tie, its pretty kool, i like that. i should read ur stuff when m just lke pissed!lol! well keep doin what ur doin cuz ur great at it. -Suicidalchild51-
this is new to yo style i never read this one is it new? neway love the rhyme scheme u should really consider joining darksyde. me and pj also break. sorry i sent this so many times but i need to get up my comments. i read each work and they are pretty good.
dude,...seriously. how do u do that? i mean, are you "special" or just talented like that? lol. jk. ur good. lemme know if u down with darksyde. tyronne'll fill u in if u got any quesstions; u know, like "what the hell is Darksyde?!". lol holla~nahlij
hmmm i think i caught what u were saying in here. though i would agree there were some words and phrases that i didnt understand. but in the beginning of the write u said people think its their responsibility to talk to u about things u dont relate to, well i dont know what u meant by when u said they think its their responsibility, but some people should hear about things they dont relate to cuz some people dont know alot about this world and what goes on in it. but anyways thats all i have to say...
this is good, even though you used some words i am not familair with i still caught the flow of the poem. it was ok i do understnad where your coming from but i jus didnt think it flowed right. good luck have fun kelly
your keepin it real wit this one. Solitude can be what everyone needs sometimes. It keeps people grounded i think.. The ending was good. 'just 2 be acknowledged by u going through these rituals 2 be finally seen as an individual sittin through times never dealin with the political'
Submission Name: nuthin 2 say
