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    Author: NgenuousProdigy
    ASL Info:    21/m/Wi
    Elite Ratio:    5.06 - 16/22/6
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
    Total Views: 245
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 403



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    Today the news page had "World about to end" in bright flashing red letters.
    I clicked the link and read what i saw..
    The sun is burning itself out and we have twenty days to live, scientists say.
    I sat starring blankly at the page..
    Not at the words.
    But at the flashing sign above them that read,
    "Congratulations! Youve won a free IPod!"




    Submitted on 2005-07-07 05:00:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey there. Well. I found this refreshing and amusing. It makes me think of how twisted and materialistic our society has become as a whole. And I just read about the subway explosions in London...which just makes me sick.

    You said a whole lot there without using many words. And I thought you did a brilliant job.

    Much love. <3

    -Samantha
    | Posted on 2005-07-07 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha! Nice man! I see my style has rubbed off on you on my extended stay at your most humble (And i do mean humble) casa. Good to see you evolving as a writer.
    I really cant critique on this.. Its almost as if i had wrote it myself.. But one recommendation would be to change the advertisement to something more ironic.. I dunno..
    Maybe the "Punch out George bush and get a free Xbox 360" one that i see all too often
    or the classic "Who is this celebrity?" pop up..
    I dunno needs more ironic.. Do more research on it or something.
    Ratio m Ducet
    BTW Die, [censored], Die.
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Ratiomeducet | [ Reply to This ]



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