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    Author: Adaria
    ASL Info:    20/F/AR
    Elite Ratio:    4.41 - 39/38/14
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 604
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1184



    Description:
       This came out of no where. I was at first messing around with my boyfriend, but then it all came spilling out of me. I like to be contradictory, my contradictions are purposeful.


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    I love the innocence I lost to the Innocent one
    Death lingers on his fingertips spilling into invisible words
    I watch in awe of his empty eyes moving over the page with Hope
    Hope that the blankness of the page will be filled by his moving words
    Death becomes him, however heartful he seems
    My eyes implore him, searching for a flaw,
    But all I find are my own
    With every heartfilling word no one will see,
    He tears down my barriers, exposing me fully
    I'm shown for what I am, black
    Despairing
    Then he smiles at me.
    He's broken me so many ways, but this is the one I enjoyed the most
    The Perfect One, taking me by the hand,
    Showing me everything I never knew existed in myself
    His invisible words, only I can see hidden behind his empty eyes
    Empty eyes that reflect only me and nothing of the world behind
    Myself, exposed to show that I am everything I should not be
    He sees me as I am, and he in his innocence, his perfection,
    Loves me, forgetting my flaws, forgetting his Deadly words.
    I love the innocence I lost to the Innocent One




    Submitted on 2005-07-07 22:17:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i believe i've seen this one before. it was awesome the first time, and it is still awesome. i have but one problem with it. knowing your boyfriend i have to question the word choice.."innocent"?.

    still it does kind of seem that he can't help his vices. it's almost as if he couldn't exist another way.
    | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by thor_s avatar | [ Reply to This ]


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