i liked this peice. it was writin very well. it just all seemed so beautiful. i cant pick a one part that i liked the best or a part that i think needs to be changed because i thought it was all really great and returnung the favor and beinmg truthful. you have a great talent for writng (probably drawing too but i havent seen your work but if its anywhere as near as good as your writng then i know it is great). good job. bye.
Hey you, i told you it was a good poem, and it is damn it!lol,j/p...but hey did you ever figur out his name or anything about him? well i just wanted to ask and i didnt get to talk to you for like the whole day except 4 like 2 times maybe so call my house sometime k?...l8r Jazz
I have 2 say what everyone else has said...stalker! LOL Just kidding. I sort of like this. Sometimes...I glare at people...and I can't turn away. Sometimes they are so beautifal or maybe I sense a nice inside beauty as well. It's strange. Nice write. Oh...who was you drawing? Write soon. Lots of luv. Bye.
Yeah. Stalker. Well, This is the typical male for you. It's what'd you call the glance pose The male is always being cautious- Make sure his fellow males keep in line And looking at the beautiful ladies, He looks around to scope the area BAM He spots you drawing him - PANIC INSTILLS- "Wait, she's drawing me???" Bingo, he adjusted pose And without a doubt Is wondering how it is coming. If he has enough guts, He'll come over and ask how is the picture coming =P Well, I think I've rambled far too long. Good Write. Big Bill