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Tainted images of beauty entrance the minds of many They steel the young and capture the old Tearing up families causing hurt to those they love Inocent minds corrupted lies filed through their brains Images of women ruined by the world and what they say is beautiful Relationships are jepordized and marriages are crushed Curse the people who sell it and curse the those who show themselves Die you evil contributers who take the ones we love How dare you come between us how dare you make them yours One little pop-up and you have them eating from you hand It's wrong to silicit sex and show what should not be How dare you ruin them How dare you take them away from us if only for a moment How Dare You!!! |
Definately a good write. You showed how you feel without resorting to vulgarity. You did not lower yourself to those you wrote about. This write shows you have strong convictions and high standards of morality. Remain strong is your beliefs and you'll do just fine. Carol | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by wannabe1 | [ Reply to This ] | This is a subject I have not seen written on here yet. Very good write. I think it is interesting how porn can corupt so many. I guess it is all how you look at things... | Indigo Kid | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by Indigo Kid | [ Reply to This ] | this poem worked... it's purpose... it worked... however... i find that porn goes much deeper than just corrupting the people who see it... it corrupts the people who are in it... it is a pimple on the ass of society in other words... no good comes of it... it corrupts deeper than just what can be seen... it rots the soul... giving into lust and other such things does that... enjoy | | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ] | Well, well, I applaud you, because you touched a subject that is so everyday. You probably will get neg feedback, but guess what? Oh! Well! Porn is an addiction, those that steadily engage don't see it that way. You are right, it does break up happy homes. Then they sometime expand to child porn, and that is the lowest of lowest! I totally agree with you once again. Great poem! take care...wanda | | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ] | hmmm lol i really dont know what to say im kinda speechless a u tackled a subject i havent read in any poem before i could feel the anger and the outrage which is good in any piece of poetry lol but wow this one reeked of outright indignation. the form was good i guess and it focuses more on meaning then decoration which is also good overall a good job :) | | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by Shadows Life | [ Reply to This ] | Wow...okay...personally i dont look at those types of things because 1)im a female and young, 2)i most definitely agree with you, and 3)i perfer to see people with cloths on. i didnt know people could get so angry off things like this. this is...well...wow. i really dont know what to say. a poem about the writer being angry over "tainted beauty" magazines. i dont want to say the p-word because ive been sheltered my whole life, i know i seem naive. but yeah even if ive never seen one i most definitely agree with most of the words in here. | | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ] | |