Description: This is just random angry thoughts about pornography and how it corrupts the people we love and care about. This piece isn't ment to be nice and neat. I just had to get some thoughts out. The world makes me so angry sometimes. How they can take an inocent mind and taint it with images of demented beauty.
I dedicate it to those who sell it, take pictures, or show it. You make me sick!
(I am in no way aiming this towards those who are victims of porn)
How dare you!!! -------------------------------------------
Tainted images of beauty
entrance the minds of many
They steel the young
and capture the old
Tearing up families
causing hurt to those they love
Inocent minds corrupted
lies filed through their brains
Images of women ruined by the world
and what they say is beautiful
Relationships are jepordized
and marriages are crushed
Curse the people who sell it
and curse the those who show themselves
Die you evil contributers
who take the ones we love
How dare you come between us
how dare you make them yours
One little pop-up
and you have them eating from you hand
It's wrong to silicit sex
and show what should not be
How dare you ruin them
How dare you take them away from us
if only for a moment
Definately a good write. You showed how you feel without resorting to vulgarity. You did not lower yourself to those you wrote about. This write shows you have strong convictions and high standards of morality. Remain strong is your beliefs and you'll do just fine. Carol
This is a subject I have not seen written on here yet. Very good write. I think it is interesting how porn can corupt so many. I guess it is all how you look at things...
this poem worked... it's purpose... it worked... however... i find that porn goes much deeper than just corrupting the people who see it... it corrupts the people who are in it... it is a pimple on the ass of society in other words... no good comes of it... it corrupts deeper than just what can be seen... it rots the soul... giving into lust and other such things does that... enjoy
Well, well, I applaud you, because you touched a subject that is so everyday. You probably will get neg feedback, but guess what? Oh! Well! Porn is an addiction, those that steadily engage don't see it that way. You are right, it does break up happy homes. Then they sometime expand to child porn, and that is the lowest of lowest! I totally agree with you once again. Great poem! take care...wanda
hmmm lol i really dont know what to say im kinda speechless a u tackled a subject i havent read in any poem before i could feel the anger and the outrage which is good in any piece of poetry lol but wow this one reeked of outright indignation. the form was good i guess and it focuses more on meaning then decoration which is also good overall a good job :)
Wow...okay...personally i dont look at those types of things because 1)im a female and young, 2)i most definitely agree with you, and 3)i perfer to see people with cloths on. i didnt know people could get so angry off things like this. this is...well...wow. i really dont know what to say. a poem about the writer being angry over "tainted beauty" magazines. i dont want to say the p-word because ive been sheltered my whole life, i know i seem naive. but yeah even if ive never seen one i most definitely agree with most of the words in here.
Submission Name: How dare you!!!
