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    dots Submission Name: My sweet wifedots
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    Author: bluesoxz
    ASL Info:    16fohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 71/101/38
    Words: 357
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy sweet wifedots
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    Like a rose you bloom.
    My sweet wife how
    Deeply I am in love with
    You. Your beauty takes
    my soul to you I owe
    Everything to.

    My savior you keep
    my heart beating and
    My faith going
    Every breathe I take
    is for you.All of me
    and all of you Are one
    We are a whole and
    Not a half unlike others
    There only a half
    We got something
    others don't This is called
    Love.

    My sweet wife your
    Laughter makes me
    smile and your tears make
    Me weep.
    I count down the days
    Until I can be by your
    Side. For you I would die.
    I would give my life
    Just to see you smile.

    On these darken days
    Your the light that shines
    Through That gives me
    Hope to see that there
    Is something to live for.
    You catch me as I fall
    And kiss me when IM
    Strong for you I long.

    My sweet wife your the
    Goddess of my soul
    That protects me from evil
    That Gives me hope and
    Carries me on.Your the
    Scent that never goes away.
    You take my breath away.

    As you speak I Close my
    Eyes and picture myself
    By your side.Your words
    Flow through me like a
    Stream of water that never
    Ends.For eternity I lock
    You in my heart so you
    Wont be very far apart.

    My sweet wife I give you
    my life.I give you the
    Keys that hold the secrets
    within.Without you there is
    No me I would not feel so
    Complete.

    For the rest of my life
    Im going to tell you I
    Love you everyday
    So you know that my
    Love never fades.
    My sweet wife Im so
    in love with you.




    Submitted on 2005-07-08 16:16:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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