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    dots Submission Name: The tactics of life.dots
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    Author: bluesoxz
    ASL Info:    16fohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 71/101/38
    Words: 358
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe tactics of life.dots
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    Stab this poor man
    in his heart and yell
    Out to all he is free
    From bondage no
    pain is a burden for
    Him anymore.

    Tie the stars together
    And tell me if they
    Still shine because
    My heart is still dark.
    The end of your sword
    is poison to my blood
    it makes me weak and
    Fall.

    As the seasons change
    I have came to it that
    This world is not the same.
    Greed lays on everyones
    heart it makes them blind
    So they cant see.

    Listen to the rain as it
    pours from the sky and
    Tell me is this mothers
    Natures tears. See an old
    man struggling to walk
    Then tell me life is easy
    Then maybe just maybe
    My lungs would have room
    To breath.

    I think free and happy
    Are the hardest words
    To be because Im never
    am.So lost my soul wonders
    Among the heavens waiting
    For the gates to open but
    never do.

    Put the word life back into
    life then maybe we can live
    instead of suffocating in are
    own sin.
    See the world as she crys
    out in pain but no one hears
    A single thing.To caught
    up in are own ways.

    Watch the devil as he
    Tears lost souls apart
    Then smiles and says
    This is a good start.
    See the person walking
    Down the street that
    is having a bad explode
    on its kid just because
    Hisher shoe is on untied.

    To fucked up to live.
    To fucked up to see.
    This world is not a humanbeing.
    So let me drown in my
    own spit and be free..
    See the carvings in my
    Arm then cry as the
    child says she wants
    To die.
    The tactics of life.




    Submitted on 2005-07-08 19:14:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was really good.
    maybe a little long but it really kept my interest.
    this i think almost tops the ladder one..
    this was really well done.
    deep.. even though you said you couldnt do it ;)

    'Listen to the rain as it
    pours from the sky and
    Tell me is this mothers
    Natures tears. See an old
    man struggling to walk
    Then tell me life is easy
    Then maybe just maybe
    My lungs would have room
    To breath. '

    this part really rung out to me.
    it was well put together. as all of it was.
    this one is something that is really easy to relate to.
    bringing out things we see and do everyday.

    'To [censored]ed up to live.
    To [censored]ed up to see.
    This world is not a humanbeing.
    So let me drown in my
    own spit and be free..
    See the carvings in my
    Arm then cry as the
    child says she wants
    To die.
    The tactics of life.'

    but the end.
    perfect.
    it was the wow moment.
    the thoughtful wondering moment left in the readers mind.
    your getting better.. its so amazing to watch your writting skills just come out.
    i hope you think back to when you said you couldnt.. and wouldnt because now you know you can do anything that you put your heart into-
    i can see it here-
    jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by joy7542 | [ Reply to This ]


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