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    dots Submission Name: Robots in the Gardendots
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    Author: little_theif
    ASL Info:    20/F/Halifax
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 42/58/26
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 256
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    Description:
       Just a cute little poem. Nothing serious. Just having some fun. A large portion of the inspiration came from the title of an Autolux song.


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    dotsRobots in the Gardendots
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    There's tiny little robots
    Playing in the garden
    They're hiding in the roses
    And climbing up the tree
    I thought I saw a few
    Playing monkey in the middle
    A gnome for the monkey
    And a marigold blossom ball
    I know what you're thinking
    You think I'm imagining things
    But I swear to you I'm not
    I wish that you'd believe me
    Before the robots finish
    Tearing up your flower bed




    Submitted on 2005-07-08 20:40:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thats so awsome yet freaky


    u wrote poems about my three fav things
    the boogyman monsters and robots

    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      This was adorable. I like the idea, and I really do think you could make a short childrens story about this topic... I can picture the illustrations. :)
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not worried, because I don't have a garden. But I hope everyone else's gardens are okay!

    Anyway... very cute, I liked it.

    {Kate}
    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by Jester_Gesture | [ Reply to This ]
      I believe you! I do! -runs to save her garden- It's sucha fun little poem. I think, you should read it to a likkle chitlin-child thing, and make them happy. Great read.
    ~rue
    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]



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