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    dots Submission Name: DARE to think for yourselfdots
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    Author: Rue
    ASL Info:    16/F/the dark side
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 244/182/44
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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       Well... what can I say? Mood altering substences are a big thing for me. DON'T lecture me... Not sure how a lot of you Eliteskillsers will react...
    -paranoid leer-


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    dotsDARE to think for yourselfdots
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    Let's get drunk
    We can drink away the sun
    Then we can mix and stir the stars
    Gulp them down and chase them with
    Milky way candy bars
    Let's get high
    Smoke the sky
    Roll up the cloud
    And pack the moon, turn up the tunes
    Turn them up real loud.




    Submitted on 2005-07-08 21:04:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I was wondering the same thing about D.A.R.E...? god I hate that [censored] program><. anyways I don't do any drugs tho I must say I've been considering a few things (pot, shrooms, acid...) for a while now...but I have too many friends who do and I can relate to the feeling they explain and [censored]. but I liked this one and...yeah it was rock [censored] awesome...keep writing.
    peace.
    ~silent_hit
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaah, this will be popular with a whole lot of people I know! ;)
    Anyways, this is kinda a statement of belief, so more power to you, buddy.
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Roberto Santos | [ Reply to This ]
      Was the tite play on words using the D.A.R.E. program against drugs and alcohol? Anyways I don't do drugs but I have a lot of friends who do. I can relate through them. I agree with broken angel, it is refreshing to see that you write what you want and don't give a sh1t what people think about it.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      Well I can definetly relate
    I am/was one of the most hardcore -people-
    in my town
    I dont do too much anymore
    But it was always friends that made it 10x better
    There is always a time for partying
    And there are times to not
    I party more than not =P
    Good write,
    Bill-
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]
      Good Times...Goood times. Love those days, i love ur thinking! but dont drink and get home to a husband and kids who dont drink, they may leave u as i did my oun father! not letureing u dont worry.
    -suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      AH... I can remember writing poetry like this when I was all into the whole psychadelic trippin' free world. You brought back a few memories I must say. I'm glad that you write what you want don't worry about what others think. But be careful with those substances, they do effect you as you get older I promise.
    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by Broken Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this! I love adding the stars and moon, and the whole "milky way candy bar." Also like the title, I think I saw that on a shirt once...Good job, great write. -peace-
    | Posted on 2005-08-10 00:00:00 | by YouLied | [ Reply to This ]


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