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    dots Submission Name: Ode to Trippydots
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    Author: Rue
    ASL Info:    16/F/the dark side
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 244/182/44
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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       Yeah. It's about a dead cat. She was my stoner kitty. I luffed her. Yeah.


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    dotsOde to Trippydots
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    Ode to Trippy

    Kneed with your nails
    Twitch your whiskers
    Calico wonder that rarely clawed
    But when she did those nails impaled

    Eyes of yellow and feet of white
    The very tail tip too
    Moving back and forth beyond my bedspread
    Looking just high as a kite

    Calico wonder ever so pretty
    Curled up in my concert tees
    I never noticed and would pull one on
    To later find hairs from that damned pretty kitty

    The coolest cat around
    Clam baked more than any before
    Had a good life that ended without strife
    Sadly she's in the ground

    A feverish mew from Trippy the cat
    And a purring at my door
    Lead me to believe the kitty wants in
    To sit in the circle with my Angus hat.





    Submitted on 2005-07-08 21:07:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree with bill. This is a good write. I had a cat named honeysuckle. He was a long haired tabby that was run over. I know how it feels.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      rofl
    I had a cat named burt
    We baked the hell out of him
    I mean
    He would stare into the mirror,
    And sit there for 15-20 minutes
    Absolutely still
    Cats are absolutely wonderful
    Im sorry for your loss
    My cat ran away =O
    Good write here,
    especially the first stanza
    Bill-
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]


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