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    dots Submission Name: Little Pixiesdots
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    Author: bigfineq
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       Pixies in cartoons were just so delightful to watch. Never a dull moment for them.


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    Darling little pixies full of delight
    Looking for mischief
    Playing in the night

    Into the peaceful forest they go
    Waking all
    Casting a golden glow

    Spreading gold dust on the flowers
    Telling them to dance
    Dance until the light hour

    Throwing gold sprinkles unto the trees
    Informing them, you can walk
    Do as you please

    The flowers danced, the trees walked
    Not satisfied, the pixes decided
    To make the rabbits talk

    All the rabbits chatted with ease
    flowers dancing with trees
    music was the humming of bees

    As daylight began to appear
    Sadly the pixies knew
    The end was near

    Undoing their spell took all their might
    They started their journey back
    Return they would, next night



    Wanda C. Tyler




    Submitted on 2005-07-08 21:51:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is such a sweet little poem. I could entirely see in my mind the whole thing as I was reading. The rhyming scheme sort of adds the pixie like whimsy to it as well.
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by little_theif | [ Reply to This ]
      Im a 6'0 215 pound black male with a mean right hook but i love pixies is that wrong? o well dont care...tinkerbell of course the star lil pixie i dont know what it is about them though always cheerful until no one believes in them and then their lights go dim. Its fantasy and imaginationt hat keep our minds going every second of everyday and something so out of this word like a 5 inch woman in a short skirt blonde hair with a tiara and a little wand jus awakens the imagination also to some sick guys they are more like sex toys..what i find really unbelievable though is they can do anything with that little wand i have a wand but i wave it and nothing happens can you explain that? im just kinding i love poems like this just cheered me up had nothing to do with the cruel thing we call life or anything just a made up fantasy thanks i feel like a little girl in a pink dress...wait anyway lol thank you once again and i will keep reading your great
    Val
    | Posted on 2005-09-18 00:00:00 | by wallya20 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey, i wanna go play with the pixies! they sound like so much fun... making the forest come alive with dancing trees and talking rabbits.

    this was very sweet and playful, i enjoyed it very much. thanks for the trip!

    stay golden,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-08-31 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      This was simply a delightful read...entertaining with the magically sound of unforced rhyming. I imagined these pixies amusing themselves making trees and flower dance and rabbits speak...wonderful fairytale that young and old alike will enjoy. Bravo write. `always write poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with Indigo Kid - this is a rather sweet poem that you could read out loud to little kids at bedtime.

    It's nice to see some harmless pixie stuff once in a while - totally different from the gazillions of depressed teen poems wafting out there on this electronic highway of eliteskills lol.

    The rhyme and meter seemed to fit too. So this is my critique, not much of one, I know but hey I've tried lol.

    Peace
    *Jase*

    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]
      pixies? someone's been watching Walt Disney movies again. You talk about me, I not the one writing about little faeries. But, I liked it. It was very interesting. keep it up with the little fariy-tale creatures.
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by babiejay | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, I just say these neat little pixies running around. Spreading life while most people sleep. This was quite the fairy tale write and was an enjoyable read. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      This reminds me of my carefree childhood days, when "fairy tales" where a true part of our exsistence, this write made me smile from begining to end. The thought of the pixies sprinkling there dust all over the flowers and trees, was a divine clear driven path. Great Job!
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Sin for cin | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this image in the woods as I sometimes imagine it happening in the woods I live right next to when I'm not looking! I loved this stanze the most:

    "All the rabbits chatted with ease
    flowers dancing with trees
    music was the humming of bees"

    The rhyming has fallen into place as if it was almost by accident and shows a nyriad of thiings going on at once. I like it very much,

    Aimee x x x
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by xdollpartsx | [ Reply to This ]
      pixies were alway intresting characters... a nice mix between playful and bad

    l like the poem

    very soft and playful

    a bit sad in parts... but a nice little poem

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    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by playing card | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem reminds me of my childhood Days..I used to have pictures of fairies in my room...as a matter of fact I still do...but It takes me back...Great poem, and imagination. By the way thank you for the comment on my poem "Part in Me" I apreciate it!
    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by deathbelow | [ Reply to This ]
      This reminds me of Disney and the Velveteen Rabit at the same time. Sweet and cute write! It is something I would read to my daughter and she would love. I love this very much...I am going to read it to her tomorrow morning as a matter of fact... Very cute!

    Indigo Kid
    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by Indigo Kid | [ Reply to This ]
      thank you for your comment. this is a reoccuring dream that has recently stopped. i do read a lot of dean koontz though! its all starting to make sense now. maybe i should start reading his books again and the dream might come back? i really enjoyed this particular poem it reminded me of my childhood and many hours of dreamscapes!
    | Posted on 2005-08-10 00:00:00 | by stormyskye | [ Reply to This ]
      I just simply love it and i am not a fan of pixie stuff, however this is amazing on so many levels.It's soft,tender,playful endearing,cute, graceful and going on my favorite list now.

    awesome write
    | Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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