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    dots Submission Name: Rearview Mirrordots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This is a found poem from p. 331 of David Guterson's Snow Falling on Cedars. MLA citation: Gutnerson, David. Snow Falling on Cedars. New York: Vintage, 1995. 331.


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    dotsRearview Mirrordots
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    In the rearview mirror
    memories stood in line
    in silence with a formality
    as beautiful as a fever.




    Submitted on 2004-04-11 11:31:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      rearview mirrors have always fascinated me...put in this perspective, i am left to ponder even more. poems like this, i love -zd
    | Posted on 2004-04-11 00:00:00 | by NoMoreGoodbyes | [ Reply to This ]
      you know. that is rather beautiful. objects in mirror are closer than they appear. and things DO line up. i used to count poles passing. but that's dangerous. as beautiful as a fever. holy [censored]. is that ever true. fever escalating like the ascension of things lining up....crazy talk. this makes me think of something i saw written on a sidewalk when i was walking my dog this morning. but i think the person was on drugs, because i couldn't make it all out despite me and my dog leaning over it like homeless people in a dumpster. yaaaa. i like this.

    thanks for sharing.

    ghost.
    | Posted on 2004-04-11 00:00:00 | by myghostsliketotravel | [ Reply to This ]


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