romancing the garden gnome by RedRoseofBlood

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Submission Name: romancing the garden gnome dots

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Author:	RedRoseofBlood
ASL Info:	17/f/outsideyourwindow
Elite Ratio:	3.33 - 590/581/134
Words:	92

Class/Type:	Poetry/Happy
Total Views:	227
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I don't even know? O.o The title is supposed to be a pun on an early 90's movie called romancing the stone. Comment.

romancing the garden gnome dots

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You sit there staring straight at me
I freaks me out, but somehow makes me happy
The sight of you while sitting by the cannas
Always brings a smile to my face
Sometimes I even talk to you
I know it's silly
I know you can't hear or understand me
But the way you stare
It makes me shiver
The butterflies sing a song as they dance around
Your nose
Your eyes looked like they moved
Chill bumps
Sometimes I even talk to you
But you can't hear me
Or can you?

Submitted on 2005-07-09 08:22:39 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this alot. Very cute and simple. It will make smile whenever I see a gnome now. I think you did a fine job here. It was a down to earth good read.
Maggie
| Posted on 2005-07-23 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
  That poem is adorable. Now every time I see a garden gnome, I will surely think of this poem. lol wow. I think I have a new phobia.
| Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by lorn_strixx | [ Reply to This ]
  I always thought Garden Gnomes were a little evil. You just know that they come alive at night and steal your potatoes.

Love the poem.
| Posted on 2005-07-12 00:00:00 | by little_theif | [ Reply to This ]
  I like garden gnomes I had one that was sitting on a magic mushroom & I think he could talk! I liked the butterflies dancing around his nose too!
Good job!
Love,Peace,Joy!
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  very sweet.. i love garden gnomes and have a few myself. perhaps they do hear you, yes? i like the butterflies singing and dancing around the gnome's nose. next time i go outside i'll talk to the gnomes and see what they have to say! i'll let you know...
@ peace&gnomes @
!Cat
| Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
  I know someone who is scared of gnomes. I almost bought him one for his birthday. Lol! Wow, this was funny! It made me laugh. I think everything you write is exreamely original and creative. Brilliant job!

Stefanie
| Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by DeadValentine | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow this makes me wish i had a lawn gnome.. I wonder if they really can hear us now.I like the flow and it's very different from most of the posts on this site. Great write and kwwp up the good work.
| Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Starry Eyes | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, i really liked this. it's very unique. the only criticism i have is that i didn't really like how you used the same line (Sometimes I even talk to you) twice. it seemed to me to disturb the flow of the poem. i think you put them their for that added effect but i think it would be more effectual if you only said it once...and if taht one time was at the very end.

Sometimes I even talk to you
But you can't hear me
Or can you?

i loved this ending, its fantastic. i don't know why, i just really liked it. thats the sometimes i even talk to you that you should keep.
*meg*
| Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by peanut911 | [ Reply to This ]
  OMG. THATS CREEPY. D=! What if they really CAN hear us? Oh, my.

I think I'll never walk past one again. o__o

Seriously. That's scary. >.>
| Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by DreamofOrganon | [ Reply to This ]

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