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    dots Submission Name: This One Time...#4dots
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    Author: nebnim
    ASL Info:    21 - Female - My Room
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 284/405/75
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
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    dotsThis One Time...#4dots
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    The Last Time

    I'm sorry...

    After some serious consideration, I've decided to discontinue this series. It was brought to my attention that there are some people who refuse to believe that these stories were true, even though they knew better. It hurt, and that doubt was like a pound of salt shoved into an already stinging wound. And though I've found that sharing these stories was very cathartic, it was also difficult. Maybe too much for me to handle at this point.
    To everyone who kept up my struggle with me, I thank you for all of your constant support and wonderful words of strength and healing. You've helped more then I could ever really say. And to those who didn't believe, and chose to voice that doubt, fuck you.
    (It felt good to say that)
    I'll continue to purge...as any true writer would. But not in this genre, and not in that format.
    Thank you again, my Guardians of Words,

    Be Well, friends
    ~Rachel~




    Submitted on 2005-07-09 11:54:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Who are they to call you a liar? Surely liars themselves. This hurts me too (of course not as much as it must have hurt you, but it hurt none the less) because writers are supppose to stick together in this sick sad world. If no one else will, then we must. I believe your stories, I've seen [censored] just as disturbing as you mention and these things only made me more human. And to those people who choose not to believe you I must be with you and say, "[censored] you". All I must say though is I would like to see you continue the series. For us, the writers who are with you and forget about those who choose to simply not open their [censored] eyes long enough to see anothers pain. I still want to hear your story, please, if you would. Talk to you soon, PEACE.
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by ConScribe | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay, I'm not going to pretend I don't know what you're talking about because that would be stupid and dishonest, niether of which I am. But I do want to know why it matters so much what others think? You have built your life on being who you are, doing what you want to do and giving the rest of the world the big finger if they don't like it. So why stop now? No one forces those who don't like it to read it, so why stop writing it?
    And one other small comment, just a personal peeve, it's not very fair to use this medium to say what you want and how you want, but tell others "f uck you" for doing the same. Just me.
    Traci :)
    | Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by onetruesmartass | [ Reply to This ]
      I guess I'm one of those crazed fools that thinks that writing is for the writer. Call it ego, call it attitude, call it chutzpah, I write for me and no one else.

    That being said, if this helps you, write and the others be damned. If it's not helping, then walk away and don't look back. In the end, it's not the truth or fiction that matters, or the comments, public or private; it's what the writing does for YOU that matters.

    Your friend always,
    Steve
    | Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Lost Sheep | [ Reply to This ]
      unfortunately for the majority of the world who are dicks and can't see the pain and anguish...oh whatever.

    it is NOT the responsibility of the reader to believe what you have to say because you tell them that it is so. it is the writer's prowess to be able to convince the reader that 'this is the truth' whether it is true or not. because you choose to see it the opposite way you are not looking for people to appreciate your writing you are looking for sympathy and because no one believes you no one will give you sympathy ...save for a few poor souls anyway.

    back to the drawing board!

    ghost.
    | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by myghostsliketotravel | [ Reply to This ]
      Dearest Rachel,
    I'm sorry to hear that you will not be continuing with this. There are idiots out there who just cannot realize that what you write has to be truth. I don't think anyone could make things like that up. Reality can be far more bizarre than fiction.

    I only hope that the support you have received from me and all the others who listened with open hearts, has helped lift some of the weight of the burdens you carry.

    Nevermind what the a**holes say, and continue to lean on us. And please, let those demons flow out onto that paper, puege them once and for all.

    Brightest Blessings to you my dear friend,
    Crystal
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by lenotoire | [ Reply to This ]


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