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    dots Submission Name: Blue Skydots
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    Author: Adaria
    ASL Info:    20/F/AR
    Elite Ratio:    4.41 - 39/38/14
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       I take a lot from experiences, and this is one of the tiny things I've noticed about things.


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    dotsBlue Skydots
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    How difficult to gaze into a blue sky
    Beautiful in it's simple stretching depth
    It feels like my soul




    Submitted on 2005-07-09 17:22:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nicely said I agree with firery_eyes it is short, but you capture everything very well. Well done I hope to see more of your insight and thoughts to things. You give me to think about well done again.
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by sheltie | [ Reply to This ]
      simply well said, dear Adaria. The soul-complex and vague to my understanding. Like the blue sky, the soul is a vast of deep thoughts, emotions...a very intriguing thing really. I find that the best poetry are the ones over the soul. In so little words you have managed to capture that truth of the soul. thanks for the short read.
    tracey
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ]


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