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    dots Submission Name: For Henniedots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2779/1297/258
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 702
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1158



    Description:
       This poem is dedicated to my wife, and is based on the split second recollection of waiting in a train station to meet my in-laws for the first time. This was the moment Indonesia ceased being a location and became a state of mind.


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    dotsFor Henniedots
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    Aku cinta kamu, maliakat-ku!
    Apa kabar? And how are you, my angel?
    The heat has risen, dove-like, from the cracks
    The pavement radiates as each await
    Some measure of relief, and who can say
    A storm may wash away the gathered warmth
    And chill the bones and melt the crowd away.
    This sea of human faces round and dark
    Have never seen so pale a guest as me
    And I had never wandered round the earth
    To bathe in oceans, colorful and deep.
    As soft as palms and fragrant as the wind
    My thoughts pile up and scatter in the air
    And all my dreams beside me whirl and dance
    As easily as dark disheveled hair.
    This moment, sharp as sunlight at mid day
    Rising to my memory, remains
    As bright as any sun above the earth
    And purer than professions hollow aim.
    Salamat pagi, istri-ku. Iím well.

    I didnít intend to wander so far
    But these things happen, and so we remain
    Adrift on an ocean of good intentions
    Be careful, salt water rots the belly
    And wandering words may do the same.




    Submitted on 2005-07-09 17:30:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I assume you were nervous about meeting her parents but enjoyed it.? THis is a serious poem and very good. I like the language in the beginning, i don't understand what it means but it left me wondering.Good write
    | Posted on 2005-07-09 00:00:00 | by Starry Eyes | [ Reply to This ]


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