I first saw you in a dream
eating Rocky Roads Ice Cream
in a scene so serene and pleasantly prestine
we watched a blue sun fade
over purple mountain tops
and nightfall cascade
in little drip drops
I looked into your eyes and breathed lifes relief
so happy were these lies in a dream that was so brief
we walk to a river as my dream continues
both of us laughin looking for lucky horseshoes
and there it was on the other side
like a shining sign from God
a Miracle I can't decide
across the river it's unflawed
Paradise was there embedded like tree roots
but you told me you can't cross wearing your cowgirl boots
take them off and come with me we'll cross the rivers flow
and tell me if you like me
YES....or NO....
cute, JD, very cute. this was honestly the least offensive thing i think you've ever written. its wierd almost, seeing you all nice n sh*t. this isn't the JD i know and despise. lol. jk broham. just thought i'd comment on something. peace~nahlij
Nice ending. Seems well suited for a song. The second stanza is interesting in that it shows how feelings for another can draw us out of the 'me' and 'i' of things and into the natural world outside ourselves.
Submission Name: Hey Debbie....
