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    dots Submission Name: life is like a deck of cardsdots
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    Author: bluesoxz
    ASL Info:    16fohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 71/101/38
    Words: 408
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotslife is like a deck of cardsdots
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    See the fire in the night
    Sky watch life as it starts
    To die.I believe I can fly.
    Compare me to a dead flower.
    And see im worth nothing.
    Watch as I rot away leaving
    Nothing but torn pieces of
    My pedals.

    I draw a picture of the devil
    And I say he is the one inside
    my head the one that talks
    To the dead but you have not
    Listen to a word I have said.
    You say its all pretend.

    Take a look around there is
    no laws here so chaos builds
    in the minds of corrupted ones
    And the wrath of sin they never
    Feel.Then their evil deeds Start.

    I put a pillow over my face and
    I begin to scream because
    This pain hurts.Lock so deep
    And I barely have little room
    To breath.Lock so deep I cant
    move but I showhow manage to
    Find the key and set my soul
    free.

    See the grass as it turns
    Brown then bring it back
    To life.. Rekindle what's lost
    Then Say I did my job then
    Find yourself falling more
    Then before.

    The hollow feeling inside
    Starts to become real.
    This is to much to deal.
    So you look at your reflection
    Knowing your not what you
    Want to be then you decide
    How much you hate God
    For the life he gave you..

    The children are exposed to
    abuse watch them crumble
    Under the pressure of living.
    Then dying is something to
    look forward to.Are hearts
    Fade with the mist in the
    air then we give up on hope
    and slowly Start to Die.

    What if there was no tomorrow
    Would you regret what you
    Have said?
    Would you have said bye to
    Your love ones or would
    You still play immortal?

    You can live the way you want
    But you have no control over
    The cards you get dealt with in
    Life.

    Life is like a deck of cards
    learn how to play the game
    before your hand folds on you.





    Submitted on 2005-07-09 23:24:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A little redundant and drawn out for me. I think the message is a good one. Some what of a prophecy. Maybe you could condense some of it. :)
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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