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    dots Submission Name: Satans Choirdots
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    Author: pandora22
    ASL Info:    22 u.s.a
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 33/40/18
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 200
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 456



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       I love my dreams!!!! Well just tell me what you think!?


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    dotsSatans Choirdots
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    Before the darkness,within the fire
    there is a choir who sing of their desire.

    They sing their sweet song tinged with pain
    of the ruby red blood of those who have been
    slain.

    They sing of the hunt thats soon to take place
    the running,the screaming,the thrill of the
    chase.

    With sharpened knifes it's time for the kill,
    tonight is the night for more blood to spill.




    Submitted on 2005-07-10 01:18:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmm.. since your not a teenager I wonder what exactly vendanta means. Anyway... This is a good piece, however, it is rather typical. Maybe it would be more unique if you added somemore descriptions and a couple more lines.:)
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      Ohhhh..God! This is scary..Hehehe. A typical teenage poem. It almost sounds like a serial killer's dream and a simple one's worst nightmare. I am sorry but I did not like this poem. Probably it's not of my liking. I am sure others could identify with it. For me, it was a randomly written plot of a crime episode.
    | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      hehe. cool.it reminds me of house of 1000 corpses. hehe. cute. the title is funny. hehe. i hope you're not as violent as your dreams :)
    | Posted on 2005-08-07 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]



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