I gotta say this poem was great. I love how these to are still constantly trying to get back at one another, it shows so much. I love it. Me personally i think you should keep on going coz its really good and i cant wait to see what happens next. These poems are great. Its a story that i hope will continue... Keep it up I love em.
Wow. I think this was really good. The ending was a shocker. What an [censored]. How could you propose infront of your ex like that. I think the rhyming was very good. Some parts weren't rhyming that great but they did rhyme. It's almost as if a couple parts had forced rhyming at the end. Anyways that doesn't matter. This has a great story to it. I liked it a lot good work. And yeah keep writting dont stop here.
keep writting i love this story no way could you end it here it would be impossiable i love it way to much and it seems to be hanging on the very edge of things so no you cant just leave people hanging in the balance this is so not fare if it was me i would smack the guy really hard across the face for wanting me there the mother to his baby when he propses to another girl anyways thats just my oppinion well talk to you latter keep up the good work