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    Author: Heartless
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 2/6/4
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Broken
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    dotsAnythingdots
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    You're hurting so much.
    You look at me,
    Your eyes pleading for help,
    For sympathy, understanding,
    Anything.
    But I can't help you.
    I just sit here and offer you
    Unspoken compassion.
    We don't say
    Anything.
    But we know.




    Submitted on 2005-07-10 10:29:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is awesome, you showed such emotion in such a few words. this is how i like my poems, short, sweet and to the point. keep writing.

    p.s
    is that you in the picture? you're hot.and no, i'm not gay. just very comfortable with who i am.
    | Posted on 2005-07-15 00:00:00 | by lethargic_me | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent! I'm not a very big fan of blank verse, I think you've done an excellent job of writing what is needed with very few words. It's a style much neglected, so I think you're doing well.
    | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by Roberto Santos | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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