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Author: Heartless
Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 2 /6 /4
Words: 39
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Broken
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You're hurting so much.
You look at me,
Your eyes pleading for help,
For sympathy, understanding,
But I can't help you.
I just sit here and offer you
Unspoken compassion.
We don't say
But we know.

Submitted on 2005-07-10 10:29:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is awesome, you showed such emotion in such a few words. this is how i like my poems, short, sweet and to the point. keep writing.

is that you in the picture? you're hot.and no, i'm not gay. just very comfortable with who i am.
| Posted on 2005-07-15 00:00:00 | by lethargic_me | [ Reply to This ]
  Excellent! I'm not a very big fan of blank verse, I think you've done an excellent job of writing what is needed with very few words. It's a style much neglected, so I think you're doing well.
| Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by Roberto Santos | [ Reply to This ]

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