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Submission Name: daily dose of masochism: redux dots

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Author:	_n3pt
Elite Ratio:	4.51 - 150/106/12
Words:	87

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
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I originally posted this poem without the actual definitions (http://www.eliteskills.com/z/64509) and thought the real definitions are both educational and creepy and provide an unique perspective.

Let me know what you think!

as always, I am eisegesically...

!n3pt

daily dose of masochism: redux dots

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vice (vIs): n
     a habitual disposition to choose evil (1)
vice (vIs): v
     a cup of coffee
     a spent cigarette

vicious (vi'-shus): adj
     corrupt in conduct or habits (2)
     depraved (2)
     immoral (2)
vicious (vi'-shus): n
     an empty chair
       half-filled with
       loneliness
       half-filled with
       self righteous contempt

1. The New Lexicon Webster’s Encyclopedic Dictionary of the English Language, 1989

2. The New International Webster’s Student Dictionary, 2002

NOTE: to see the original post click on the following link... http://www.eliteskills.com/z/64509

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in my opinion, this works much better. when you include the original definitions, it gives the reader a better sense of what you are trying to accomplish here. it's well understood the first time around. however, this goes more in-depth with your attitudes and themes behind the piece. this poem really speaks volumes to me. i spend much of my time alone, thinking about being alone, and/or wanting to be alone. that's the curse of the deep thinker. i do enjoy your work, and i think that this writing is really a true peak of what you can do. great job. keep on writing! *^_^*

hugs and spinning in circles of loneliness,
~*dark_and_dreary*~
| Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by dark_and_dreary | [ Reply to This ]
Yeah this is neat, to say the least. I love people who push whats considered the format of poetry, not just the content - and as others have said, this is darn creative and very unique. Impressive stuff, look forward to reading more.
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Von Django | [ Reply to This ]

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