It's like this Pain -------------------------------------------
It's like poison blades
digging deep into my skin
it's like you use to love me
but I guess I could have been wrong
It's like a bad trip
you don't want me anymore
evil words sprung from your hate
I wish I was hallucinating
But I know I'm not
This is real
I know this is it
I thought we could try, I thought we could pretend to be something that resembles happy
I hate the pain
I don't know how to be numb
I don't know how to belong to anyone but you
I don't know how to pretend to hate you when I don't
I don't know why we are here again
but there isn't anything that can make it go away
it's too late
how can you say that you regret saying goodbye
how can I let you
"I don't know how to pretend to hate you when I don't"
this line is emotionally crying ../. it sounds like the poem here at hand ./. is very breaking: with a (who was) sanifacant other .../ i love the way you ended the poem it made me just wanting more and more / keep up the good work. JWI
Ooo I could feel a lot of emotion in this one. I know exactly what it's like, and it's horrible, but at least great poetry comes out of it. Although I love the whole thing, my favorite part was:
"I hate the pain I don't know how to be numb I don't know how to belong to anyone but you I don't know how to pretend to hate you when I don't"
That definitely stuck out the most for me. I could feel every line as I read it. The wording was excellent. I hope everything works out for you. Great job :-)
hey, i really enjoyed the depth of this poem. i dont know you so im not goin to judge you on rythm or anything. great and touching poem....i have been there one to many time before ...stay strong. love and death: razogirl
Submission Name: It's like this Pain
