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So Stupid...

Author: thesacredone
ASL Info:    18/F/BK
Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 139 /159 /50
Words: 107
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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teehee! I love squirrells and squirrell chasers!!!

So Stupid...

That stupid squirrell fell outta the tree
And landed right there on top of me...
O'course, you know me. I flipped out.
I whooped and hollared, and gave a good shout.
And the next thing I know, the squirrell's sittin on me,
so I jumped again, up on INTO that tree,
so he got mad an' chased me about...
I thought I was liable to NEver get out...
Then all of a sudden here came a cat,
And that was sure the end of that.
Me and the squirrell teamed up till the end,
And that's how me and the squirrell became friends.

Submitted on 2005-07-10 18:08:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is random as hell. but i like random stuff. only question i have is what inspired u to write this? i dont see how u could have come up with this
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by lost omen | [ Reply to This ]
  um...okay...funny, but slightly strange and random, but randomness is good, because without it where would we be??? Strangeness is also good because that means indivuality, and without indivuality we all be the same, you see and sameness would be a semblance of perfection, but only a semblance...
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Siren Mengana | [ Reply to This ]

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