Description: (My first post, the dog picture was found on google, comment liberally :)
What if you could suddenly know and do anything, except change the minds of others? Or if you had enough money to buy anything except trust... Or if you found love with/from as many beautiful people as you wanted, but realized you were never satisfied, always looking for someone new... It would likely bring us to the realization that our personal problems are always within ourselves, that we are always alone and empty, from a certain perspective, and that our perspective becomes more important than our influence.
This title got my attention. I didn't quite know what it meant, but I gather that it means "Inadequate power" or " Influence that is unsatisfactory" or something in that line. The freestyling I don't quite grasp, but for some reason I think it works. I'm not sure I understand all that is being said... but a lot ties in with what I understand of the title.
The rhyme works yet again as in the other work, but it works better here.
dam... you used words in that i could never even put into place... that was an amazing piece... i dont know the whole meaning but i think i understand enough to enjoy it... thanks alot, that was truyly an awsome write.