hey kristen i loved this its is really beautiful, and touching. im glad that you found someone like that for yourself. this poem is now a new fave of mine keep it up girl...bw how are ya doing its been awhile since we last talked...take care Joy
This really was beautiful...made me think of my boyfriend! I think you captured the feeling of being with someone, falling asleep in their arms, and wanting to stay that way forever. Really good write...brought a smile to me face! Thanks! ~hailie~
*tear* beautiful....I'm happy that someone is in love...and write great poetry about it...some light imagery creates lovely surface feeling throughout my body....I hope your love lasts long and is as beautiful as this poem.
aww man, that was awsome, i loved the whole thing.. its really great to have a love so good, for me ive been unblessed with the unfortune of having no luck finding sum 1, for my fiance left me the other day, for another guy... so all i can do is look back and read excellent poems like this 1... keep up the good work aj