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    dots Submission Name: Having fundots
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    Author: Highland Girl
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 22/23/11
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       This really was a night to remember.


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    dotsHaving fundots
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    The other night was so much fun
    Spray painting walls till we were done
    We covered up other people's work
    Leaving our sign for the other jerk

    We painted and painted with all our might
    To cover up his awful sight
    Then off we went when we did end
    With Hany to the Academy to meet a friend

    It was much to Salim's surprise by far
    When we all got out of the car
    It was a shock when he did see
    Sunny, Sarah and of course me

    We talked a little and were about to go
    When Salah walked out the door
    He said hello to Sarah and how do you do
    Salim said do you know him too?

    Of course I do, don't forget
    I spoke to him on the internet
    It was time to go and say goodbye
    He will see his wall and it will make him cry

    It really was a night of fun
    What we wanted to do, was all done.







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