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    dots Submission Name: Amethyst Thoughtsdots
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    Author: reveries
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 54/74/23
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       first of all....sorry for being a dead sheep!....umm....I hope you enjoy this rather chaotic piece of me :-P and I'll be posting a lot more often again.....sorry!


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    dotsAmethyst Thoughtsdots
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    There are amethyst thoughts
    that are beyond textbooks
    beyond the endless skies
    beyond the span of the unvierse
    They are birthed from
    madness-
    They rock voices into stars
    and create worlds that walk like
    hip hop-
    poetaster-
    nonstop chaotic density.
    Amethyst-
    With hues that flip moods
     
    moons envy it's abysmal
    intensity.




    Submitted on 2005-07-11 08:01:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      very nice...don't worry my friend knows all about being a dead sheep...umm...let's see...favorite lines 'nonstop chaotic density' and
    'hues that flip moods'...do u ever feel like colors determine ur mood...or like portray ur mood?
    like when im really depressed, im all-out goth...when im feeling a little less depressed, i wera a little less black...but whatever
    | Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Alyra | [ Reply to This ]


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