Take Me Away by WindEmpress

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Submission Name: Take Me Away dots

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Author:	WindEmpress
ASL Info:	15/f/meditating
Elite Ratio:	3.15 - 95/124/44
Words:	96

Class/Type:	Lyrics/
Total Views:	318
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	703

Description:
Thought of this awhile ago. I think this is my best! This is in honor of Fatal Frame III: The Tornmented ( And of course the other two!)

The beauty of this piece can be of your own creativity. Is this person running from ghosts, werewolves, or . . . something else? A new idea.

Take Me Away dots

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They're everywhere. . .
Haunting me, haunting me
Talking to me of their pain
Hunting me, hunting me
Waiting for me to fall

They'll come for the kill
Once you trip
They'll follow you to death
Hoping to relinquish their pain

They're everywhere . . .
Haunting me, haunting me
Pressing my fears
Hunting me, hunting me
Waiting for the kill

Fear courses through my veins
Their icy touch
Stills my heat
Taking me away

Haunting me, haunting me
Taking what they want
Hunting me, hunting me
Waiting to take me away

Submitted on 2005-07-11 20:55:32 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Awesome lyrics. I have a tune in my mind, but I can't wait to hear what yours is. I agree with many others that it has an eerie aspect to it. As one who has never experienced the joys of Fatal Frame, I can only come up with so many questions and answers that correspond with this song. I suppose others who want to know might need to check out the game to see the most obvious problems since you said it was in honor of the game. However, you also said it is very open for interpretation. You have a gift for writing universal pieces. Readers can twist this song and make it suit their own obstacles in life that drag them down. I loved it. ~SirensSong~
| Posted on 2005-07-12 00:00:00 | by SirensSong | [ Reply to This ]
  It has a life like quality to it. The way you describe it is kinda of the way fear of something can take hold of you and keep you there. I liked it keep it up.
Georgina
| Posted on 2005-07-12 00:00:00 | by Raye | [ Reply to This ]
  as a lyricist this seems more like poetry to me. i wouldnt call it lyrics. i like the ominous auora of the words though nice work
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by lost omen | [ Reply to This ]
  Well its sad how somethings bring people down to the dirt and they dont stop there they go in for the kill...You just got to learn no matter what you wont give up... life is going to throw things at you but its your decison to sink or swim and i hope you pick to swim.. now this poem was dark it talks about how something or something is haunting you and they wont give up. its dark I can feel your everyword as I have read. The only thing I will tell you to do is put in there what are you scared of what is haunting your dreams.. well think about it for now but all and all this was a really good poem and I cant wait to see you post some more of your poetry.
love always amber
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by bluesoxz | [ Reply to This ]
  hmmm this did have a intense feeling and i like that. i can also here the eerie tune in the background it gives it a little something. but yes im also question whats after you? where are u running to? those are things u should probably add in here so we can read this and understand it better.

brenna
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]
  i dunno man. where would u like to go? what r u running from? i didn't see any message - not even in the unclearity of it. i can understand vague stuff but this was like going around in circles . . . a very small one and not too many things to see on the ride.
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]
  I can hear a eerie tune in background as I read this song. I like it. I would like to know what's hunting you? Are you talking about personal demons? What is this bad presence you are trying to escape?
Maggie
| Posted on 2005-07-11 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]

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