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    dots Submission Name: Trustdots
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    Author: Ola
    ASL Info:    18/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 221/187/42
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 586
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    Bytes: 533



    Description:
       well 'm not just feeling this poem. it's supposed to be bout this one girl who was ma close friend but more or less betrayed ma trust. so yall enjoy this, k?


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    dotsTrustdots
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    A friend is someone you can trust
    And know that trusts you too

    Trust is what I thought
    We had between us two

    But apparently we have different definitions
    Of what love and friendship means

    Cos I thought friendship was more or less love
    And u told me to snap out of my dreams

    It's funny how u were the very one
    Who talked bout love or trust

    I'm sorry girl, you blew my beliefs
    like wind does to dust.




    Submitted on 2004-04-11 19:05:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liek this it is good, and this happens a lot in friendships i can account that it has happened to me at least 3 or 4 times, but it will all be okay, great write i can really relate!
    | Posted on 2004-04-14 00:00:00 | by gigglygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen. I think the X-files said it best: trust no one. I'm sorry ur friend betrayed u, but at least it wasn't over something worse?
    shard
    | Posted on 2004-04-11 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. Like a confession almost. Completely honest and forth coming. Something that anyone could relate to. Good indeed.
    | Posted on 2004-04-11 00:00:00 | by Aj | [ Reply to This ]



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