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Author:	pandora22
ASL Info:	22 u.s.a
Elite Ratio:	2.54 - 33/40/18
Words:	53

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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This was written several years ago when i had a bit of a drug problem....it's not the best but I reminds me of how far i've come.....

Drugs

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Life of strife,terror,and woe.
Hit the pipe,the bottle,the blow.

The drugs are a disguise,
they cover my face.

They help me feel free.
Like I'm in a far off place.

When I'm not using I lose my glow,
then I'm back in my life of strife,terror,
and woe.

Submitted on 2005-07-12 21:47:59 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I agree compleatly with you(morethanamemory) using drug isn't a brave way to handle things for me it was the last option i thought was available to me but I don't do them anymore...sometimes i still want to but i don't ...this poem is just how i felt at the time I'm not saying go do drug as a matter of fact if anyone reads this i want them to realize that your not the same person if and when you use drugs and thats a bad thing thanks for the comments though. pan
| Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by pandora22 | [ Reply to This ]
  yo that was good. i'm glad u gave that [censored] up cuz drugs'll mess u up seriously. i like when u say that drugs are a disguise and that they cover ur face becuz it shows that when u do drugs u aren't urself and that ur trying to hide from somethin. great read. kinda short though. thanx for readin pretend
| Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  Firstl, well done for overcoming your addiction. There's nothing on Earth quite like it, I've been told. So you're a very strong person.
Also, quite a writer, it seems.
The part which had the best, strongest message was the very first bit; "Life of strife,terror,and woe.
Hit the pipe,the bottle,the blow." I thought this had a very strong message for anyone who was an addict or hada problem, and I think it shows how easy it is for people to reach for the drugs straight away when they feel pain.
(By the way, the last lines were good too, but I don't want to sound drawling. Sorry.)
| Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by writhe | [ Reply to This ]
  great rhyme scheme and flow and message...and another short one and i like it...it's interesting to read especially to thosr people who shares he same prob as u...
| Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
  this poem has a nice meaning. drugs aren't a way out. face your problems head on. good luck to you!

about the poem... i liked it a lot but the ending is a bit cut short. this has a lot of potential. keep on writting!i look forward to reading your other poems.

kataclysmic
| Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by kataclysmic | [ Reply to This ]
  Hang in there... I was there, looking constantly for my next high, looking for the person to get me that next bottle of whiskey to numb the pain that was my life. Things will get better, it was at the last possible second for me, but something will come into your life that will make you want to leave the drugs and the alcohol. For me it was my son. Good luck to you and even though we do not know each other if you need someone to talk to who has been there write me and we can talk. God Bless
| Posted on 2005-07-12 00:00:00 | by kriley6497 | [ Reply to This ]
  well this is true. when people use drugs they arent themselves. i have friends who do weed and say its great because its like they are in a far away place. but i still think its sad they have to use drugs to make themselves seem happier. so i can see why u wrote this to see how far u've come and its a good thing u got away from it.:-).

brenna
| Posted on 2005-07-12 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]

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