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    dots Submission Name: High Expectationsdots
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    Author: machhli
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 5/7/6
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 226
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This poem is just about the normal feelings of a human being, who always expects more. The human nature is never satisfied with whatever it has. it expects things which he cannot get, he likes the person who can never be his.. he has to accept whtever he has


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    dotsHigh Expectationsdots
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    Why do we expect things what we know we r not going to get
    Why are we attracted by everything what we know it is never to be ours
    It is always we ask for things for we cannot reach
    It is very good to look high and aim for things
    But, if they are stars we should not even dream about
    Coz, they are only made to shine in the sky
    And not opt for them.
    Oh my dear friend, YOU are like that small star for me
    Who has been playing a very special role in my life.
    You are that star who I can see, talk, feel, and also love
    But, can never get it.
    U have left those footprints in life, which can never be wiped.

    I would just like to ask u: -
    Why do u look at me so, that I could not look back
    Why do u talk to me so, that I could never reply back
    Why do u touch me so, that I could not sense back
    Why do u love me so, that I could never turn back
    Whenever I’m alone I always think
    Will I ever get this star, or I will just have to admire it?

    Is it always that - “Good things are always hard to reach??”





    Submitted on 2005-07-13 04:38:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a great question...humans tend to strive for more and more...always thinking this is never enough...and I think you did a good job with portraying that in this poem.Nice job.
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the message behind this poem, it's just my inherent bias against blank verse which stops me from rating this as a good poem.
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by Roberto Santos | [ Reply to This ]



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