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    dots Submission Name: MOTIVATIONdots
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    Author: dylanpoe
    ASL Info:    21 m la
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 322/332/56
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1165
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1446



    Description:
       Dont get me wrong this aint no stab at rapping, this aint no beef with somebody on here. this is basically a little ballad for e'erbody who aint scared to speak their mind. if you put to much thought in this you will miss it so please just read it and take it like it is


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    dotsMOTIVATIONdots
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    Its motivation
    every time you say i aint true
    C student writing like this, who knew
    Put down in the streets
    cant live without beef
    addicted to elite and the bull shit it brings
    so many fakers sing my name everyday
    half these idiots dont know the game i play
    Motivation
    When you say im a fool, and i say "fuck you"
    People call me racist, say i aint real
    You keep feeding me the fire, and thats real:
    dumb, how you expect to throw me down
    when you can only last one round
    my flames grow higher, everytime i see my name
    writing love or this shit, its all the same
    Motivation
    Who gives a shit about spelling
    cause you must be stupid, if you think my shit aint selling
    so quick to put down, quicker to back down
    why is that? you afraid of someone who speaks
    all of a sudden you meek, cause you found out
    you fucking around
    with somebody thats got
    motivation
    This aint for me, this a ballad for all
    This for e'erbody who says "fuck you" and stands tall
    Society and elite they on the same page
    They keep pissing us off, giving us some rage
    But I'm oh so calm, I just love playing with fire
    Especially when its fueled by desire and
    MOTIVATION
    SO TELL THE WORLD
    FUCK YOU WITHOUT HESITATION




    Submitted on 2005-07-13 08:54:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice. Reminds me of your brother's "Fight Song". Gotta have some sort of motivation. Whatever gets(keeps) you writing I guess.

    p.s. props for looking out for your bro. he's a cool kid.
    | Posted on 2005-07-24 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]
      *bobbin head*

    Boy...you are steppin your rap game up! LOL

    Even went and bought yourself a cordless mic!

    Do your thing! LOL

    This was really good! I am proud of you. The more you practice it...the more you master it.

    BRAVO HOMIE!

    LI LI
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow...you know how to speak your mind. It's amazing what will make people tick and give us to think about. All the words that fuel fires that's what keeps us going. I think that you are a great writer- very honest and you really put yourself out there. I must say...you've got some balls! I respect that. Everytime I read something of yours I get another perspective on life. Keep it up. I appreciate ya!
    Candi
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]


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