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    dots Submission Name: You-turndots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    51/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1035/1330/360
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 307
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    Description:
       A poem from God's perspective.


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    dotsYou-turndots
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    I came in love and told the truth,
    But you believed the lie.
    I granted mercy, patiently.
    My plans you still deny.

    I stand accused, but innocent.
    Your pride won't let you see.
    Each time I bring an olive branch,
    you nail me to its tree.


    The Gadfly




    Submitted on 2005-07-13 12:06:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aint that the truth. My sister has a license plate frame that says something like...God allows u-turns...this reminded me of that and thanks for posting it. Everytime I visit your page I learn or am reminded of the great power that shines down from above. And thats cool, cool beans man. So often do we forget that He does not turn his back on us...we turn ours on Him. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      I could take this poem two ways. 1) It's about the rejection of Jesus by the Jews. or 2) You have a very distrusting, mean spirited, diva like girlfriend. Either way, it was a powerful poem to read. I love it.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      mmm, this made me sad.
    i kept seeing a little boy chasing after a girl with a small little flower and her just pushing him down but he keeps getting up. that's what this made me think of.
    short and sweet.
    sometimes you have to learn how to just let go.. or keep going.
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by fallingingreen | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice! Short and sweet yet powerful just the same! You have taken a very involved religious time and wrapped it all up in a brief, well written poem! Nice job!
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this poem alot. My interpretation of it is that more and more people are losing the faith. It makes me think about myself and metaphorically speaking "do I keep nailing HIM to a tree" I don't know.
    It's good though.
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by lethargic_me | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this. It's short but speaks so loudly to all humans as a whole. We've been given the gift of LIFE.. yet, we continually curse and complain about all we're (assumingly) missing. Blaming God for all the troubles that we, ourselves, create.
    A very compelling read.
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]


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