I know what you mean here...in your defense to Yclipse you were just trying to get across a point here...well that's what I see, and you did that well, so you reached your goal and you should be no less than proud.
I thought it was a cute poem. Definitely need to work on the grammar, though. ;). lol just for starters, "lable" as you spelled it is spelled "label". Otherwise, it was very clear as to what you were trying to get across and enjoyable to the reader. Keep writing, my friend. Caitlin