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    dots Submission Name: To Be Numbdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 769
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    Description:
       I was watching City of Angels...Nicholas Cage was talking about the little girl in the beginning of the movie...she said what good were wings if you couldn't feel the wind on your face...I was inspired by that.


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    dotsTo Be Numbdots
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    And what if you were numb
    truly numb
    nerves serving a void
    unable to feel
    no harm
    no pleasure
    no wind across your face
    no touch to ease the pain

    And what if you couldn't cry
    couldn't smile
    heart so broke you never knew another emotion to man

    you would be numb...indifferent to all that's good
    and I just think that's incredibly sad
    to be numb





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      Sometimes I want to be numb to some of this and other times i am weird huh? Made me think about how good I have it sometimes even though i feel i 've got a rough deal you know what i'm saying. All in all this is brill Jaz
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    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by hammyj | [ Reply to This ]
      this was great almost as lonely as love II thanx for your comments i value your opinion as i enjoy all the thoughts i've read of yours
    i will write something and post today that will top lonely not sure title yet
    thanx again and enjoy the next post
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      You sure you didn't write this one about me? I feel this way most of the time...Have to put on a happy face for the rest of the world, you know? It was really beautiful...I think you're awesome!
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      damn...i sorry jazz, i cant help u or be there for u to help u/.///i wish i could make it aLL GO AWAY..but i can't...just please dont give up life for me, cuz man dont want to lose someone i care about...well pease tak good care ofurself...ill ttul, bye
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow...I really like this. I used to wish I could be numb to all feelings and after this I realized how bad it could actually be. I never thought about not being able to feel touch and happiness. This made a big impression on me, don't quit.
    | Posted on 2005-07-13 00:00:00 | by Rhayne O_Reilly | [ Reply to This ]


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