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    dots Submission Name: Monstersdots
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    Author: peanut911
    ASL Info:    19/f/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.89 - 19/19/8
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 700
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 312



    Description:
       just yet another i wrote a couple years ago.


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    dotsMonstersdots
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    Monsters
    Munch
    Messily,
    Mouth opening,
    Food revealed,
    Disgusting,
    Impatiently
    Demanding more,
    Groaning,
    Growling,
    Over a tiny morsel of goo,
    Hungry for more
    People.




    Submitted on 2005-07-14 12:56:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It was short, but to the point! I'm glad I'm not a young child reading this. I'll have to check under the bed and in the closet. I'll have to keep the light on at night. You gave a good picture of a monster. Nice short write!...wanda
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was quirky, but kinda cute, but it doesn't seem to let me make a post on it... LOL! I'd say more, but it was so short, and direct, that that is all I can come up with! (Is this enough words to post now???)
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]


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