Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Wonderzdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 709
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 555



    Description:
       Spent the day at the river just appreciating all of nature.

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWonderzdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I saw and I became:

    The Golden Sunset
    peeking behind
    the trees of ancient powers

    The speckled butterfly
    art in movement
    loving the flowers

    The six strong
    flock of patterned
    geese

    The beach of sand,
    rocks and
    peace

    The sunlit leaves
    of growing trees

    The black and yellow
    of the bees

    The forceful current
    and undertow

    The lapping waves of
    ebb and flow




    Submitted on 2005-07-14 13:22:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Your connection w/ nature in this piece is awesome. You do a great job showing the majestic beauty of the natural world and your place in it. I don't know why but this makes me think of the eastern philosophies. The serenity of the piece is almost metaphysical. great job.
    | Posted on 2005-07-15 00:00:00 | by bentnotbroken | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha, yet another love,peace,joy poem by you. Is this what kind of genre you write? Haha, I like this one yet again, it doesn't make me think of smileys and pink puffy clouds, I think of nature and it's elegant beauty, thanks. This piece was great.

    Abort
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    66549

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Shut Up written by annie0888
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Love written by saartha
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Carry written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    The World written by jjd
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Cover written by saartha
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry