As the sun sets
it's life and
light are a lamp
to shine upon
the shadows of darkness...
As the currents
will continue to flow
So shall I go
With an infinite
I got a feeling of a cleansing. The washing of the light that gives you a renewed inner strength and rejuvination of your soul. It actually gave me religeous visions of the Lord's Light washing away sin and giving that peace that you can face anything. Following the new path of Illumination. I love the title and the work. Smiles
Tiffany this short verse left me feeling so at peace. It is as you inhaled and exhaled your surroundings and then put it into written expression. Your imagery in this was exceptional. `Always write poetry, Cheryl.
"Illuminated".. what an excellent title for this piece. Even your discription fits. One can feel love, peace, joy, while reading from line to line. I really like that even after the sun sets you can still feel it's illuminating rays warming you throughout. A very lovely read. Thanks, ~Sandra
This has a nice rhythm, good open verse. It reminds me of my girlfriend, whihc is always a good thing (as if I need to be reminded) anyway, this is nice, not too clichéed. Interestingly short, but stil pretty decent.
Ah, this is so awesome, I kind of feel this way about a girl I know! Lol, this is awesome, truley awesome, it's so new and your style is amazing at this. Hahaha, I don't know, I usually don't like prose like these, but you know, I like this one alot. Great Job