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    dots Submission Name: Changing For Youdots
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    Author: lethargic_me
    ASL Info:    15,chick
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 74/87/22
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 244
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 356



    Description:
       This is about me denying who I was for the sake of others. I didn't like doing then, and I don't like doing it now. I'm fine with who I am and what I like.


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    dotsChanging For Youdots
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    I wanted to be like you, so I tried to change myself.
    I lied to be your friend, I wanted so bad to fit in. For a second I was mean, for a minute I was cruel. Just to be like you, just to be with you.

    I guess you know I failed. I highly doubt you care.

    I never want to be your 'friend'. I never want to fit in.




    Submitted on 2005-07-14 21:50:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      At first it did seem like a desperate call but in the end, though short, the meaning is very powerful, I loved the write everyone can relate to this, we all put on masks sometimes and when we're strong enough we take them off.
    | Posted on 2005-07-15 00:00:00 | by ceestyl | [ Reply to This ]
      Very short and sweet...and to the point. But, I dig the vibe I'm getting from it. I've definitely been in that situation and this pretty much explains it. good write. <3
    | Posted on 2005-07-15 00:00:00 | by shes automatic | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. sounds like a desperate call in the beginning but then in the end its all like [censored] you. i really liked how it was written. and i like what it might bring to peoples minds about always being themselves. good write. keep it up. KeLLy
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by bleedinbabygrl8 | [ Reply to This ]



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