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    dots Submission Name: How Do I Knowdots
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    Author: morbid_misery
    ASL Info:    17/f/ontcanada
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 40/61/33
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 914
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    Description:
       this poems about reincarnation


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    dotsHow Do I Knowdots
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    And ther say deaths only the begining
    and living life isn't enough
    and what happens if I just give up
    and theres more to life after I die
    but how do I know this isn't some lie
    how do i know this is real
    how do i know its real

    and promises of whats to come
    and its my only escape from
    and all the things from my past
    and all the things I wanted to last
    but how do I know this isn't some lie
    how do I know if this is real
    how do I know its real

    and they say good things come in time
    and I lack patience is that a crime
    and if deaths only the begining wheres it end
    and why do I have to keep living to pretend
    but how do I know this isn't some lie
    how do I know this is real
    how do I know its real

    and how many promises have I kept
    and how many people have I left
    and how long is this life going to take
    and how long am I going to have to be fake
    but how do I know this isn't some lie
    how do I know this is real
    how do I know its real




    Submitted on 2005-07-15 13:08:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      in my opinion you explained this perfectly. i loved the flow of this poem and reincarnation has always been a big subject of curiosity for me. keep writing.
    | Posted on 2005-07-15 00:00:00 | by lethargic_me | [ Reply to This ]
      hey another person from ontario wow not to many of us i live in toronto great write i like the dark writes reading and writing them very good image you leave the reader with
    well done
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-07-15 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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