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    dots Submission Name: [Sinner's.Bone]dots
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    Author: serge
    ASL Info:    17/male/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    6 - 20/12/4
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
    Total Views: 224
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1642



    Description:
       Proud to be an Athiest. Too many people have tried to force religion unto me. I have done quite a bit of theology and don't see why people can't leave me be.


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    dots[Sinner's.Bone]dots
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    [Intro] (Child's Voice[soft]) In the begining, God created the Heavens and the Earth...

    [Verse One]
    [FATHER!]
    IF YOU'RE THERE...
    [WHY?!]
    WHY DO YOU ALLOW
    SO MUCH PAIN TO BARE?
    [A TEST?]
    HUMANS ARE A PEST
    [THE MOST BEAUTIFUL PLANET]
    YOUR PRECIOUS CREATIONS
    ARE NOT THE BEST...
    [DIVIDED THROUGH ALL THE NATIONS]
    THEY ARE SHIT...
    LAY THEM TO REST!

    [Chorus]
    Condem me
    Chastise me
    I can't see
    I'm bleeding free


    [Verse Two]
    Your walk in life
    Amuses me
    You talk to yourself
    More than he
    Who is psychotic!
    [CATATONIC]
    [USE SOME LOGIC]
    Its no use
    I don't believe
    I suggest
    You turn and leave
    BEFORE SHIT HITS THAT VEST

    [Breakdown] (Staggered)
    Either
    step up...
    or get
    out of
    my face...

    EITHER
    STEP UP,
    OR GET
    OUT OF
    MY FACE...
    RIGHT NOW


    [Verse Three]
    You sit up on your mighty throne
    Made from a sinner's vein and bone
    Twisted and Sadistic
    just try to make me feel alone.
    listen bitch, watch me go spastic.
    BITCH THIS FUCKIN' GUN AINT PLASTIC

    [Chorus] x2


    [Outro] (Low Growl with wind in background)
    "Death does not concern us, for as long as we exist, death is not here... and when death does come, we no longer exist."
    (~Epicurus.)




    Submitted on 2005-07-15 18:24:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      my favorite two bars would be
    listen [censored], watch me go spastic.
    BITCH THIS [censored]IN' GUN AINT PLASTIC

    Be different man...do something no one else does And if anybody dont like punch'em in their [censored]in mouth
    | Posted on 2005-07-25 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
      dude this piece is awesome! despite the fact that i am not an athiest, i do like it! i am not an athiest, but i am not religious either. i consider myself spiritual. but i like it because sometime i have those conflicting thoughts in my head. and i am glad to hear people stand up in what they believe in! so what if you don't believe in GOD. why should anyone else even care. everyone is entitle to their own beliefs. anyways, nice piece!
    | Posted on 2005-07-19 00:00:00 | by L.i. | [ Reply to This ]
      ha ha i like this "either step up or get out of my face." even though you are an athiest i can see a deist thinking like that too. very cool and bold.
    i wanted to ask though the words in the brackets in this song is that background singing? it almost feel like a punk song. i want some kick ass tunes to go with this ok? mike:)
    | Posted on 2005-08-02 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      A great deal of "ANGER" is expressed..Sounds like you have had a tiff with the "HUMAN SPECIES". Well thast comprehensible especially when one is subjected to so much "PAIN"...I love this verse"YOUR PRECIOUS CREATIONS
    ARE NOT THE BEST...
    [DIVIDED THROUGH ALL THE NATIONS]
    THEY ARE SHIT...
    LAY THEM TO REST"...It made me laugh alot...wish I could sometimes say something like this when people push me..However I cant be a victim of circumstances. Still its an incredible way of "REPREMANDING...the HUMAN RACE..for their FAULTS"...
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by Nobantu | [ Reply to This ]



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