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it started as a release to dull the razors edge now it acts as his crutch and it hasn't failed him yet another visit to neverland a vacation from the pain no one noticed, no one sees his life's run down the drain he hangs he sways he'll never change his hang man is his friend he floats he drifts he took the risk his sweet release until the end until one day he realized that everyone had left no dreams, no life, no family the truth he wouldn't except so he and his friend took one last ride to see how far they'd get they didn't get far, and the poor boys heart deep inside him began to break unlike his addiction that slowly killed him these feelings, they weren't fake he realized his fault far to late his friend now owns his life he has no strength to just say no he's tired, he'd rather die they once had a good time together but in return, his friend took his life |
one word: Real. i think the last verse could have been longer like the other verses but all in all extremly good! | Posted on 2004-04-12 00:00:00 | by Watchman | [ Reply to This ] | really scary. and true. really good. loved the title and it just got better by reading the work. Thanks for sharing | Pryncess | Posted on 2004-04-12 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ] | |