Description: Okay. I'm in a weird, cynical mood. I wrote this in a journal a while back but it still makes me giggle like a 6 year old school girl. That and crazy people, right?
Have a great weekend! Don't get a sunburn standing in line for Harry Potter!
as always, I am Potterifically-
!n3pt
p.s. it's sad when the "description" of a poem is longer than the actual poem.
american haiku -------------------------------------------
blah blah blah blah blah
blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
God I'm a genious
i'd like some more cod on the first line, that would make the yeast more consistant in the carrotine of the entire haiku. i like eating insulation and scratching my hip bones with broken pieces of balsa wood. the shark in my kitchen won't let me cook a daffodil keesh and its really shining my rye bread crust, you know what i mean? how's that for nonsensical?~nahlij
Oh sh.it man, that's killer! I love it. Never thought i'd see a poem where the only literary device used...is mispelling. Neato daddy..do it again..do it again!
Awww...c'mon..(stomps foot)..but you said!
*whimpers back to drawing board to dream up something new*
I laughed at the simplicity of the messege. I can't say I would have had the courage to submit it myself however. The fact that you got a comment stating the opinion that such a poem would be a waste. You inspired the comment from them never the less. I think that the blah blah was the whole point of this. Smiles
[censored]in' hilarious. A president couldn't have said it better himself. To be able to epitomize America's pompous attitude within the simple construct of a Haiku WAS a stroke of genius.
Ha-ha! How clever are you! Thanks for the smile on this one! You have captured our society perfectly with this! This was so simply obvious yet I would never think of it! Great job!
I love this! What a great way to just say, "Hey, f*ck all of you!" to the world. I don't know if I should take this seriously or not, but I think it's great...and it kind of made me giggle like a teenage girl again. I can see this out there in the world, with people looking at it and trying to puzzle out the "true" meaning of it. Great, just great. What a choice of words!
Hah! Well it certainly embodies the American spirit of everyone i know (Including myself). We all see ourselves as geniuses (Is that even right, Geniuses? heh) in our own minds.. We generally feel all our works are of the greatest merit while in the long run its nothing more then a bunch of blahs in the grand scheme of things. Definately a piece defining our culture..
Ah.. Who knows what the true intent of this poem is? I think its quite open to individual opinion.. and on that note i applaud you. You definately have quite an open and fresh idea regarding things of poetic natures.. and for that i applaud you. Screw the people who think this isnt art, i say. Hang the lot of them by their filthy tongues, i say. But what more can i say? Insomnia makes you hallucinate? possibly.. But im sure most people know that. Ratio.
Submission Name: american haiku
