hey,I like your pieces they are very unique.But I think you can add up more to this piece and give it more interest.I do beleive that love does`n t mean nothing today.Love isn`t always the answer.But I think your writing are great.Ye,good job!
Please read my work and say what you think about them.I think you will be a good judger.
Cry myself to death is an interesting line. Its a nice twist on the 'crying yourself to sleep' cliché, but in my mind death is just another, more final stage of sleep. This is a nice change from your usually wordier pieces. It reminded me of opening your heart and love to someone, and have them reject it like it was meaning less.
this is sad, but hey the truth can be like that. I dont really think the last line fits in quite right, i like it n all, it just doesnt seem to fit. anyways this was a pretty neat haiku. something new for you?
Submission Name: Tears mark my grave
