First Jamaican Cigar by freak_like

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Submission Name: First Jamaican Cigar dots

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Author:	freak_like_me
ASL Info:	18/female/Ireland
Elite Ratio:	4.79 - 111/109/41
Words:	14

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Comedy
Total Views:	248
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	106

Description:
Not a long one, an experiment if you like, a few lyrics, it shouldt be a very hard one to crack :p

First Jamaican Cigar dots

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With 2 skins
In determed form
I rolled
White thins
In pride
I smiled...

Submitted on 2005-07-17 06:51:26 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
hmmmm
yeh i know what its like
i smiled... is great
maybe you could describe it a bit better though but... its ok
short poem short(bad) comment
purple haze,
Jimi
| Posted on 2005-07-17 00:00:00 | by Jimi James | [ Reply to This ]
With 2 skins
In determed form (determined)
I rolled
White thins
In pride
I smiled...

Besides that wonderful piece, simple and sweet.
There can be many analogys behind it as well. Keep up the good work.

Ryan B. Wilbur
| Posted on 2005-07-17 00:00:00 | by 27_deadpoets | [ Reply to This ]

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