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    dots Submission Name: First Jamaican Cigardots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 892
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 106



    Description:
       Not a long one, an experiment if you like, a few lyrics, it shouldt be a very hard one to crack :p


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    dotsFirst Jamaican Cigardots
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    With 2 skins
    In determed form
    I rolled
    White thins
    In pride
    I smiled...




    Submitted on 2005-07-17 06:51:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmmmm
    yeh i know what its like
    i smiled... is great
    maybe you could describe it a bit better though but... its ok
    short poem short(bad) comment
    purple haze,
    Jimi
    | Posted on 2005-07-17 00:00:00 | by Jimi James | [ Reply to This ]
      With 2 skins
    In determed form (determined)
    I rolled
    White thins
    In pride
    I smiled...

    Besides that wonderful piece, simple and sweet.
    There can be many analogys behind it as well. Keep up the good work.

    Ryan B. Wilbur
    | Posted on 2005-07-17 00:00:00 | by 27_deadpoets | [ Reply to This ]


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