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    dots Submission Name: Born of Marbledots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
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    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBorn of Marbledots
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    Naked,
    I examine your skin,
    blue-white,
    blue veined,
    firm, smooth
    as though you were born of marble.





    Submitted on 2004-04-12 04:29:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your poem sounds...well rounded. And with quite some depth.
    I enjoyed reading your poem.
    | Posted on 2004-04-16 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
      i am thinking the statue of david here. born of marble, perfection, but cold as stone.

    i was thinking about doing a poem about degas, but i thought i'd run it by you first. since it was your poem monet that inspired it. also, if you would like to see a picture of me go to my main page, and click under website it will have the link. it will take you to my profile under yahoo. take care, layla
    | Posted on 2004-04-12 00:00:00 | by colagirl | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm thinking - is this as it is? or is this a metaphor for looking at someone and not being able to see who they are? like taking off the covers of something - trying to see the essense - but finding something beautiful - yet coldly beautiful. which is it??
    | Posted on 2004-04-12 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]


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