Description: i dunno what's with me tonight, wish you were around love but you went so, whatever I guess. I'm fine, no worries.
Forever and a Day -------------------------------------------
Tucked away beneath my heart
Right next to the dream.
A wish upon a star,
It seems so far
But I tell myself,
They're both right up close.
I tell myself,
It's almost here.
I tell myself,
That there's no reason to fear.
Hopefully you're mine.
Maybe if I'm lucky,
It'll last until the end of time.
Maybe if I'm lucky
It'll last forever and a day.
Every word of this is so pretty. The way you put them together is beautiful. I can't even explain how much I like this. The flow and emotion was perfect. You did a great job expressing yourself. Sometimes love can be the hardest part of living, but also the best. The whole thing is great, but I really love the lines:
"I'm yours, Hopefully you're mine."
That definitely stuck out the most. I know too well what its like. Good luck with everything. Great job
Sarah, I was glad to see some of your work tonight. it's nice to see people that I'm actually familiar with again. I see your life is progressing along those painful adolescent years when love is extremes of happy and depressed. it does get better, and I've decided that forever and a day takes a lor of work from both sides-even soulmates screw up sometimes. Hang in there and keep writing. jan
so much blah blah blah bleh? hehe i hearts it and i will try my damndest to make it last that long. i am glad i get to read another b e a utiful peice of work from you it fills my days up with the smae goo that fill your what is it called veins i think that it is called love? hehe i love you and you kow that
hello , very beautiful piece , great flow and feeling , wanting love to last forever , is the one thing we all want when we love someone , wanting it to last forever and a day , wanting more than forever just lovely , great ending. take care Lainie x