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    dots Submission Name: Blissful Despairdots
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    Author: lethargic_me
    ASL Info:    15,chick
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 74/87/22
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 287
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 565



    Description:
       My friend Josh and I have got this weird relationship. We've known each other since third grade but he moved when fifth grade ended, but we keep in touch and every year about this time he comes to see me. This is about having that passion with him and wanting him, but not loving him and knowing that the things we do together are wrong because they might fuck our friendship up.


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    dotsBlissful Despairdots
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    I'm watching your face and trying to remember that day I kissed you, in sweet November.

    You catch me staring, I can't grasp my bearings as you move in closer on the inside I'm swearing.

    Your lips catch my lips, your hand wraps around my hips, the world starts spinning and I completely lose grip.

    My mind screams no my body screams yes, so I glide my hand over your warm, tight chest.

    We shouldn't be doing this, I know it but don't care, and I pull you down in blissful despair.




    Submitted on 2005-07-17 23:46:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its short n sweet n u get right to the point.. i relly like it.. i like the short stanzas it makes it all flow much easier.. wow i never say flow.. ur lucky lol <3ash
    | Posted on 2005-07-20 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like the way you wrote this like how short the stanzas were " I know it but don't care, and I pull you down in blissful despair." that was my favorite part i dunno it just poped out from the rest.
    xox rahcel
    | Posted on 2005-07-18 00:00:00 | by nobody6 | [ Reply to This ]



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